1. Concept Strength

You built the identity around:

• Flowing sound waves
• Movement
• A feminine profile symbol
• Music + desert + culture narrative

The idea is cohesive.

The line system (wave graphics) works as:

– Background texture
– Framing device
– Motion element
– Typographic container

That’s good system thinking.

This is not just a logo.
It’s an identity language.

2. The Symbol

The profile + flowing hair waves mark is strong conceptually.

It communicates:

• Sound
• Wind
• Movement
• Music energy

However:

The illustration style is slightly softer and more decorative than your BENTAYGA mark.

This one is expressive.
BENTAYGA is controlled.

Different personality.

Not worse.
Just different.

3. Typography

You used Noto Sans.

Safe.
Clean.
Readable.

But here’s the truth:

For a music festival,
you could have pushed the typography further.

Right now the system feels modern and elegant —
but not explosive.

Music festivals usually lean into:

Energy
Scale contrast
Bold layout
Rhythm in typography

You played it refined.
Which is okay — but it makes it feel more “cultural event”
than “high-energy festival.”

4. Color System

The teal gradient is your strongest decision here.

It feels:

Fresh
Atmospheric
Night-stage lighting inspired
Contemporary

This color world is cohesive and mature.

Better color handling here than in BENTAYGA.

5. System Application

Posters → strong
Billboard → strong
Vinyl cover → nice touch
Badge → solid

This project feels more like a full identity rollout
than just logo design.

That’s good portfolio material.

6. Emotional Presence

This is your only project that feels:

Alive.

The wave system gives it motion.
It doesn’t feel static.

That matters.

7. Direct Comparison With BENTAYGA

BENTAYGA:
• Cleaner
• Stronger logo
• More premium
• More controlled

EUDORA:
• More expressive
• More atmospheric
• Stronger identity system
• Better storytelling

If I had to choose the project that feels the most “designed” overall?

EUDORA.

If I had to choose the strongest logo mark?

BENTAYGA.